Are You Using Vague Nouns in Your Writing?

https://loupiccolo.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/08/Vague-Nouns.mp4 If you want readers to clearly see what you are describing in your writing, you must use nouns that are both concrete and specific. Clothes is the example of…
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Are You Using Excessive Adverbs in Your Writing?

https://loupiccolo.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/08/Lou-Piccolo-Using-adverbs-in-your-writing.mp4 An excessive use of adverbs is a sentence-level problem you might find in your writing.Adverbs are essentially a form of telling. As a writer, I have been told repeatedly…
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Shadow of Doubt – SL Beaumont

Shadow of Doubt by SL Beaumont is a suspenseful novel challenging the notion of trust and betrayal in close relationships. Jessica McDonald has the life most people dream of –…
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The Winterkeeper – Anna Schmidt

Desperate to escape the clutches of her abusive stepfather, fourteen-year-old Millie Chase sets out to find her deceased mother’s best friend in nearby Yellowstone National Park. Millie doesn’t know where…
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Chapter Book or Middle-Grade Novel?

Hi Lou, I received a rejection letter from an agent for my chapter book yesterday. He’s written that I’ve mixed up chapter books and middle grade books, but the children…
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Lost on the Water by D.G. Driver

Teenage angst, unreasonable parents, family secrets and ghosts – Lost on the Water by D.G. Driver has it all, and more. Fourteen-year-old Dannie is uprooted from her home in California…
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The Time Telephone – Connie Lacy

Originally written for and published by Readers’ Favorite. In The Time Telephone, 17-year-old Megan McConnell is grieving for her mother, a foreign correspondent who was killed on assignment in Afghanistan.…
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