Are You Using Vague Nouns in Your Writing?

If you want readers to clearly see what you are describing in your writing, you must use nouns that are both concrete and specific.

Clothes is the example of a vague noun.

Work clothes is a better choice, because it’s specific, but it’s still not concrete.

A red, black and grey flannel jacket, a pair of blue denim jeans and heavy caulk boots is a vivid description of clothes worn by a lumberjack.

Can’t you just see him?

So, if you are using vague nouns in your writing, ask yourself if using a more specific one would paint a more vivid picture, and if the answer is yes, then change it!

FREE GUIDE: NAILING MIDDLE-GRADE VOICE

In middle-grade fiction, voice is the way your character thinks, speaks, and experiences the world. It’s the bridge that communicates your story and your protagonist in the most effective way to kids reading your book. If your draft is missing voice, this guide has the solutions!